Rise Of The Gunslinger Sorry
I don't want to be disrespectful, but personally I don't see this as Front Page worthy. I'll try to be constructive with my criticism. The story was quite strong, I liked where it was going right up until it turned out he was a ghost. I suppose that's just opinion though. The drawings however, are bad. That is unfortunately a fact... in my opinion lol. The characters prepared me for a comedy, which it isn't (unless it's some obscure comedy that I don't understand haha) . That was the biggest flaw in my view, the graphics. The best thing was the music, but that is (as you've admitted) obviously not yours. So to sum up again, good, but not front page worthy
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rooftop skate competition 